Log #14 - Conviction and Courage

LOG # 14. Why do you think the author wrote this story? Where did he or she get the idea or the characters? What message do you think that the author is trying to share?

I believe the message the author was trying to convey was one of courage and the rite of passage from boyhood into manhood. Henry's story begins with a desire to be a man -- being brave and sure in his decisions and actions -- and yet, grappling with feelings of insecurity and his fears.

Ultimately, the story is one of discovering one's true self through strength of conviction and courage.

Log #13 - Unusual...not at all

LOG # 13. It is not unusual to wish that our lives were more like the lives of characters in stories. How would you change your own real life to be more like the world of your story?

I have to agree it is not unusual to wish our lives could be more like the lives of characters we read about or even see in movies and on T.V. That being said, I cannot in all honesty say I have a wish for my life to be more like any of the characters in this story. After all, even though it is a story about courage, it is also a story about being a soldier in war. At this point, I do not have any desire to enlist in the military.

Other than finding and having courage in my life in different aspects, I do not relate to the lives of the characters as wanting my own life to be more like theirs.

Log #12 - Puzzled and Confused

LOG # 12. Are you puzzled or confused about anything in the story? What is it that confuses you, and why do you find it confusing?

Nothing puzzles me about the story itself, as much as interpreting what is happening in the story (again, another complaint about the writing style). Sometimes it is difficult to keep up with who is who because other than Henry, the characters are not written by name. At times that makes it a little confusing because you have either be very focused on who is saying what, or you're relegated to going back and re-reading the last few sentences.

Overall, I get the gist of the story without too much confusion.

Log #11

LOG # 11. When you wish to learn when you read again tomorrow; what do you hope will happen in the story or to the characters? Why do you wish for that to happen?

I hope the character of "the loud soldier" will garner some courage and doesn't succumb to death the way he described it as being his "first and last battle." It would be exciting to read about Henry's encounters in battle rather than his narrative thoughts about what might happen or what happens to others.

Reading the action sequences are much more entertaining than reading about the probability of some action or reading about the descriptions of Henry's thoughts and ponderings about what is to come.

Log #10 - Surprises

LOG # 10. As you read today, what surprised you? Explain how this will affect the story or how it changed your thinking about the story.

What was surprising was the actual description of the men being involved in a battle. It seemed as if the story would go on forever in anticipation of a battle. I was pleasantly surprised to finally get into the beginning of some action. I was also surprised to find that someone else's fear, other than Henry's, got the best of them.

Reading about the action was so descriptive that you could almost imagine yourself being there watching it happen -- as if hearing a play-by-play given to you by an announcer; although, the feeling hasn't changed for me as far as the wordiness of the writer. It hasn't changed my thinking about the story as much as it has made it become a bit more interesting.

Log #9

LOG # 9. If you could ask any character a question, what would you ask? If you could ask the author a question, what might that be? Explain why you chose these questions.

I would ask the main character, Henry, what his reason or reasons were for joining the army. I didn't get a true sense of that in the beginning of the book.

I would ask the author what possessed him to tell this story; was it in any way autobiographical? Did the story come from tales he was told by a family member or friend? These are curious questions because of the complex and detailed way in which the story is written. I admit that even though I would ask these questions and would be genuinely curious about the answers, I am not the biggest fan of trying to interpret the old English slang and speech.


Other than the main character, Henry, and the author - I would not have any questions of anyone else.

Log #8 - Conflicts or Problems

LOG # 8. Now that you are this far into the story, what do you look forward to learning next? What conflicts or problems do you think the characters will face? What qualities of your character (honest, loyal, cruel, dishonest, angry, vengeful) will affect how the character handles the problems and conflicts he or she encounters?

I would most look forward to the men actually going into battle and learning whether or not their courage will truly be tested. This is what I believe is the true meaning of the book and where the story seems to be heading. The conflicts and problems that will be faced will most likely be whether or not to face the battle or to run from it.

At this point it seems the young man, Henry, displays a lack confidence in himself in the way he doubts his will to be courageous and stand up and fight in battle. This may affect the other men in his brigade if he is unable to help defend against the enemy (if that finally happens). Henry seems to be loyal and honest, but he also seems to be short-tempered and nervous. Hopefully his courage will win out in the end.