Log #11

LOG # 11. When you wish to learn when you read again tomorrow; what do you hope will happen in the story or to the characters? Why do you wish for that to happen?

I hope the character of "the loud soldier" will garner some courage and doesn't succumb to death the way he described it as being his "first and last battle." It would be exciting to read about Henry's encounters in battle rather than his narrative thoughts about what might happen or what happens to others.

Reading the action sequences are much more entertaining than reading about the probability of some action or reading about the descriptions of Henry's thoughts and ponderings about what is to come.

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