Log #10 - Surprises

LOG # 10. As you read today, what surprised you? Explain how this will affect the story or how it changed your thinking about the story.

What was surprising was the actual description of the men being involved in a battle. It seemed as if the story would go on forever in anticipation of a battle. I was pleasantly surprised to finally get into the beginning of some action. I was also surprised to find that someone else's fear, other than Henry's, got the best of them.

Reading about the action was so descriptive that you could almost imagine yourself being there watching it happen -- as if hearing a play-by-play given to you by an announcer; although, the feeling hasn't changed for me as far as the wordiness of the writer. It hasn't changed my thinking about the story as much as it has made it become a bit more interesting.